INT. BAR– NIGHT.
Two men in their mid-forties, Robert and Dev, are clearly sloshed and singing “Home For A Rest” on the small stage at the back of the karaoke bar. There is no live band behind them, only an instrumental accompaniment and two microphones. The bar is busy but most of the audience are talking amongst themselves whilst the two men are having the time of their lives.
In the meantime, two middle aged women, Denise and Holly, enter the bar with the hopefulness and nervousness that only comes after spending the past four hundred Saturday nights couped up at home with the kids.
Denise happily scans the bar, while in a panic, Holly is searching for a spot to sit.
Oh my, my, my.
We should try and grab one of the tables over there.
Halls, do you see the eye candy in here?
All the good looking men, do you think I could pass for 25? Fresh out of college?
Let’s get a drink before we discuss that.
Holly grabs Denise’s arm and walks her to a nearby table.
Well, c’mon now.
Holly and Denise sit down at the table. Holly opens the drink menu.
I guess we won’t be needing this tonight!
Denise aggressively pulls off Holly’s wedding ring as it goes flying and lands towards the back of the bar.
You really did not just do that–
MAMA IS COMING OUT TONIGHT!
Look I know we both haven’t been out in some time, but don’t you think that was a little extreme?
You need to bring back that ring. I cannot lose my wedding ring Denise!
Denise slips under the table and gets on all fours on the floor.
(gets out of her chair)
Oh firetruck, this is why we never go out together. Or go out. Period.
Holly gets on the ground with Denise.
This is great. The first time in eight months I go to stay up past nine, have a little fun, do a little dance–
Get down tonight.
(sighs in disappointment)
What is Bill going to think when I come home without my wedding ring!?
Blame it all on me. I am sure Bill will understand.
Holly and Denise are still crawling along the floor. Holly is desperately leading while Denise is crawling behind.
No, Bill will notice immediately. He will say something passive aggressive like,
(mocking Bill’s voice in a lowered voice)
“I see you didn’t want to be tied down for the night”
and he’ll be joking, but make comments about it until Christmas.
We’ll find the ring I am sure.
And then, when you think he’s built a bridge and gotten over it, he will bring it up over turkey,
(mocking Bill’s voice)
“Hall, don’t accidentally lose it in the cranberry sauce! Or was that your plan because Joe is sitting beside you?”
Joe? As in, Bill’s brother?
AND, that is just with him thinking I didn’t wear it. What if this ring is gone for good? To Bill, that’s the same as our entire fifteen years of marriage being lost!
(mocking Bill’s voice)
“The day I got you that ring I had been putting aside twenty dollars a day for eight months.”
Someone walks into Denise.
Uh, watch it? Down here buddy!
“It was a sunny day and I walked into this old boutique, all the signs pointed to you. Everything seemed to click and that is when I knew, I had to propose right there and then.”
That is such a nice story Hall…
Shut up. We need to find this.
Jumpcut to Robert and Dev still singing on stage. Still sloshed.
YOU’LL HAVE TO EXCUSE ME
I’M NOT AT MY BEST
(talking over song)
Do… do you think we should stop?
TAKE ME HOME…PHILLYS!
(talking over song)
ONE MORE TIME!
GUY IN CROWD (off camera)
Someone take them home!
Jumpcut to Denise and Holly.
Denise is crawling along the ground and towards the stage. Suddenly, she spots the ring right next to Robert’s microphone.
I see it! Holly, it’s right there!
Where?! On the STAGE?
Denise is creeping up towards the side of the stage. Robert sees her and turns to shoot airguns at her.
Denise climbs up onto the stage.
Wait until they’re done!
Just as Denise is inches away from grabbing the ring, the song finishes once again. Robert and Dev look down to see Denise in between the two of them, on her knees.
The music stops.
Woah, woah who cut the cord?
I knew this would bring me chicks.
(grabbing the ring)
Ah, got it!
Denise suddenly notices how quiet the bar got, and that everyone is staring at her.
(starts to sing acapella)
You’ll have to, excuse me, I’m not at my best. I’ve been gone for a month, I’ve been drunk since I left. These so called vacations, will soon be my death. I’m so sick from the drink, I need home for a rest…
There is a long pause in the audience.
Then, Robert and Dev join in on the next verse. Together, the three of them sing “Home For A Rest” for the third time. Holly takes a seat in the audience and shakes her head, laughing.